Lyrics

🎵 Song Name: “Heavy Crown”
🎵 Genre: Trap
🎵 Tone: Bold, triumphant, unstoppable
🎵 Instrument Selection: Deep 808s, rapid-fire hi-hats, eerie pads, melodic synths
🎵 Metric Density of Vocals: Verses: High (8-10 syllables per measure); Chorus: Moderate (6-8 syllables per measure); Bridge: Low (3-5 syllables per measure)

Intro
(Spoken)
Pressure made the jewels, the weight made me great,
They said the crown’s heavy; I said check the plate.

Chorus
Crown too heavy, I carry that weight,
Built my empire, I set my fate.
Rings on my hands, gold lines in my slate,
Now they chant my name, like a king, they wait.

Verse 1
Out the mud, made it shine like quartz,
Turned pain into flame, now I’m cuttin’ through cords.
Tried to throw shade, but the glow’s too fierce,
Made a path outta rubble, now the throne appears.

Grind all night, got stars for a ceiling,
Moved from broke to a life worth stealing.
Wrote my worth in bars, now the world’s repeating,
A lion at heart, but my crown stays gleaming.

Pre-Chorus
No handouts, had to carve my throne,
Fought every battle with blood and bone.
They wanted my fall, but I’ve only grown,
Now the king’s here, better watch your tone.

Chorus
Crown too heavy, I carry that weight,
Built my empire, I set my fate.
Rings on my hands, gold lines in my slate,
Now they chant my name, like a king, they wait.

Verse 2
They ain’t see the nights when my soul was spent,
Just see the bag and the money I’ve sent.
Took each L like a lesson that’s lent,
Now the commas stack up, and the message is bent.

Got the flow so cold, you could feel the chill,
But the grind’s so hot, I could melt a mill.
Blueprint stamped, yeah, I wrote the drill,
Now the moves so sharp, like I’m forged in steel.

Bridge
Heavy crown, heavy head, yeah, the burden’s real,
But the fire in my veins made the kingdom seal.
Hustle’s my sword, and my heart’s my shield,
Now the story they tell is my battlefield.

Chorus (Outro)
Crown too heavy, I carry that weight,
Built my empire, I set my fate.
Rings on my hands, gold lines in my slate,
Now they chant my name, like a king, they wait.

What do you think of the improved wordplay and rhythm? Should we start crafting the instrumental, or is there more polishing you’d like?